Amazing Young Writers Stories 401 to 500

Amazing Young Writers Stories 401 to 500

On this page, you will find the fourth 100 stories, poems and other pieces of creative writing submitted to the amazing young writers challenge.

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Story 401

Death or Not?

by Smiles Angel Azah Som

In the heart of the woods lies an orphanage ruled by hefty vines and engulfed by crawling ivy. In the frayed moonlight it glistens, and the impenetrable brambles hack away at the battered cobblestone, hungry for more.

The trees sway in the groaning wind, and the night becomes a raven girl, Vampire Astrid. She soars through the sky as if she owns the night. The ants look up to behold this, momentarily.

Will she kill?

Everything around her says so. Evil penetrates her skin. Murder engulfs her mind.

Will she kill?

Maybe or maybe not. You’ll see.

*

Smiles is 12 and lives in the UK.

Story 402

Cocker Spaniel

by Charlotte Warington-Smyth

Running

Through

The

Fields

With

The

Sun

On his back.

 

Storming

Through

The

Bushes

With

Hair

Like a haystack.

 

Proudly he pounces on an unsuspecting pheasant

And with a stride in his step brings home the present

Foliage tangled within his hair

He makes his way over to the nicest armchair

Out of the cupboard I retrieve a brush

And try to calm him with a soft 'hush'

Piece by piece I take out the brambles

But soon he is scared and out he scrambles

Crawling into bed

He rests his tiny head

My little cocker spaniel.

*

Charlotte is 13 and lives in the UK.

Story 403

Cola Wars

by Finlay

World War One, then World War Two

'Pepsi Cola', then 'Pepsi Blue'

'Coca Cola', then 'Coke New'

History comes back to you

 

Every year a common cold

New variant becomes the old

Pity for your failing health

History repeats itself

*

Finlay is 20 and lives in the UK.

Story 404

The World Without Her

by Raiya

I live in a world that’s different but the same – the same shops, the same sky, yet nothing feels the same without her.

Grief flooded me like a tsunami. I still here her laugh echo through rooms I’m in.

At school, I wear a mask and pretend, but in my head, I know she should be here.

Healing doesn’t mean forgetting. It means learning how to live with a hole in your heart. Because my love for her hasn’t faded – she still fills my world.

Even in this new one, she always will.

*

Raiya is 15 and lives in England.

Story 405

The Last Tick of War

by Syeda Marium Ahmed

Under a bruised, war-stained sky, Mara unearthed a clock buried in scorched earth, its hands trembling backward. Each defiant tick rewound the battlefield: smoke curling into clouds, bullets sliding back into guns, screams folding into silence. Time obeyed her trembling touch. The dead stirred, rising from crimson mud with glassy eyes, whispering her name. The village’s ruins stitched themselves whole, its streets breathing again. Yet with every reversal, Mara’s pulse weakened, her form dissolving into ash and memory.

When dawn broke, peace returned – but she was gone. The clock remained, half-buried, gleaming, waiting for another desperate soul.

*

Syeda is 16 and lives in England.

Story 406

Blue is the Colour of Death

by Agnes Joanna

The sky is blue today, like the colour of my sister's eyes before she died, the colour of the ocean. The air crackles with a strange energy, sparks of unseen force dancing across my skin. I inhale, the sharp air biting my lungs.

The lake seems to call out to me, its dark surface beckoning me with a pull I can't ignore. Something is waiting beneath the water, whispering my name, urging me to dive in.

As soon as I step closer, I hear it. A voice, not my own, calling from the depths.

*

Agnes is 14 and lives in the United Arab Emirates.

Story 407

The Ninja Cats

by Daisy-Belle Phillips

Simba, Bella and Tabbs are no ordinary cats. In the morning, they are normal, but at night they’re the NINJA CATS. They fight crime and other bad cats. They’ve put nine cats in jail.

The leader of the bad cats, Minnie-Mick, is the baddest of them all. One night, the cats saw Minnie-Mick stealing from the bank – UH-OH!

Minnie-Mick spotted the NINJA CATS and ran. He hid, but the NINJA CATS caught him and put him in jail. They put the money back and everyone cheered.

The NINJA CATS disappeared into the moonlight. No one has heard or seen them since.

*

Daisy-Belle is 12 and lives in Wales.

Story 408

Shoulders of Giants

by Aditi Golyan

Isaac Newton proclaimed, "If I have seen further, it is by standing on the shoulders of giants." Every achievement stands on the shoulders of others, whether a child learning to speak, a chick flying under the guidance of a mother, or an organisation succeeding over an individual.

Building my businesses was only possible because of mentors' guidance, family words of encouragement, collective smartness, and the experiences of veteran brains. Even the most self-made appear to be motivated by others. Personal growth thrives on the support of groups – guidance, criticism, encouragement, and continuous motivation.

True achievement is not isolation; strength is gained through those who inspire, guide, and enable us.

*

Aditi is 15 and lives in India.

Story 409

Remember The ANZACs

by Charlotte

The shocks of the shells and bullets flying,

Hundreds and thousands of men were dying,

PTSD following them their whole life,

Seeing friends dying, the gruesome sight,

The ANZAC's just wished that they were back home,

Free of the enemies and weapons that roam,

Most were just buried with a small wooden cross,

While families suffered the grief and the loss,

We will forever remember them and say 'Lest We Forget',

To all those poor souls, we're forever in debt,

With a minute of silence, an ode and a special parade,

We will remember them all on ANZAC day...

*

Charlotte is 13 and lives in Australia.

Story 410

Warmth, Within Myself

by Tells

Warmth, it grew itself on me, the more I learned to be. It seeped itself within my heart, as if it was the solace of its dreams.

Solitude was known to be lonesome and cold, yet it unleashed a fire within me. A forgotten spark held in the embrace of the darkness, one that consumes and devours all forms of happiness, but finding what was once lost was like finding the ugliness I didn’t want eyes to see.

This time, I wasn’t the weak and dull, but the confident women I chose to be.

*

Tells is 18 and lives in the Federated States of Micronesia.

Story 411

No Man's Land

by Luke

“Thank God,” were the words the agent used.

Agent Smith, an intellectual, was currently doing an investigation on an 'innocent' woman’s property.

This property made headlines: ‘Dead Man Found in Property’

That wasn’t the only time, either: ‘Dead Husband Discovered by a Sobbing Wife'

The wife made it up. She made a mannequin look like her dead husband.

Why did she do this? That’s what the agent needed to find out. And yet… he never managed to.

BBC news headlines two months after the investigation stated: ‘Agent, Found Executed on Investigated Property’

Will anyone ever come out alive?

*

Luke is 15 and lives in the UK.

Story 412

My Father, A Killer!

by Autumn Evans

Normal day. I had to go feed my dogs though, that was different. But I guess things had to change sometimes. I hadn’t seen my dog Bear today when he normally sleeps right beside me.

Panic surged through my veins. Where was he?

But then I saw it. A knife. Was that… blood? A daunting trail of red spots lead out to the balcony.

There was a note. It read, “Well, I didn’t realise it would be you. I mean, I’ve got your mother and your dog… Death would have hopefully taken him by now. You’re next…”

*

Autumn is 12 and lives in the UK.

Story 413

The Balancing Act

by Valentina Hyde Elosua

Boots by the door, books on my bed,

Homework waiting, goals in my head.

Early alarms, muddy knees,

Dreams chased on turf and in degrees.

Between exams and extra time,

I juggle pressure, sweat, and rhyme.

Teachers talk, coaches shout,

Both worlds I can’t live without.

One builds my mind, one fires my soul,

Together they make me feel whole.

It’s not easy, but it’s mine to keep,

Late-night study, early-morning leap.

Football and school, my endless test,

Balancing both, giving my best.

*

Valentina is 13 and lives in Scotland.

Story 414

A Journey on a Rowboat

by Alice Mułyk

Confined within my rowboat, stagnant upon the glass lake, I become dumb and intoxicated with the feeling of awe. Amidst the colossal mountains, I grasp my insignificance in the face of these divine stone structures surrounding me.

For a moment, I am utterly convinced that these everlasting idols pierce my soul with their gaze and transcend my most private thoughts. They see right through me.

Instantly, as if to redirect my attention, the lightless sky spits out a torrent of crystalline snow and the dawning of my own mortality reverberates through my fragile, human body.

The blizzard stirs on.

*

Alice is 15 and lives in England.

Story 415

I Didn’t Survive the Ghost

by Kaci Millard-Lovell

The harsh blowing wind makes the naked trees slow dance, the squeaky gates following along. Crows sing, as if they are welcoming me in. Dim, yellow lights flicker, drawing me closer to the rotten, red front door. My sweaty palms tremble with fear as I open it.

Floorboards creak as I take each step. Tears rush down my face as I tiptoe more into the haunted house.

SLAM!

A huge draft enters the house, making the rotten, warped, wooden door slam shut. Out of the broken glass window, I can see a pack of grey cloud-like wolves howling at the full moon.

“Come up stairs, we all want to meet you.”

*

Kaci is 17 and lives in the UK.

Story 416

The Gilded Cage

by James Kelland

In Arena-9, I felt the soft, manufactured contentment produced by the reactor's golden light. Shift Leader Faun’s smile reflected the endless, soothing joy of service we’re told is fulfilment.

Then, the Apex’s resonance struck.

The golden light turned cheap, the air cold. A bitter, metallic taste, like a used battery, filled my mouth. This was the Soul Tax: a tariff of raw, brutal negativity. Their corrosive will and stressed-out envy slammed into my mind, shattering enforced happiness.

We’re their emotion holders, kept perfectly joyful, so when the Apex unleashes their pain, we’ve something beautiful to lose. We’re quiet-happy bins, waiting to be emptied.

*

James is 13 and lives in England.

Story 417

Toyoko Velocity

by Alex Bagnall

Engines roared beneath Tokyo's neon skyline. Kenji gripped the wheel, heart pounding with the rhythm of the city.

The rain-slick streets reflected streaks of red and gold as he pulled the handbrake – his car slid sideways, inches from the guardrail.

Behind him, headlights hunted like wolves. One wrong move meant metal and fire. But drifting was his language, his rebellion.

Around the final corner, he let go of fear, trusting the machine, the moment, the madness. Tyres screamed. The city blurred.

For a breathless instant, he wasn't chasing victory – he was free, dancing with the storm on Tokyo's electric edge.

*

Alex is 16 and lives in Ireland.

Story 418

Nature's Quartet

by Krishika Murkuri

Snow falls gently to the ground,

Greenery cannot be found,

Gifts are given to children,

Christmas is looked forward to,

Elves have so much to do.

 

Flowers appear from the ground,

Sunshine and warmth are finally found,

Days are now longer,

New lives bloom,

Then comes the rain very soon.

 

The sun comes out,

Children run about,

No more school,

Along with many treats,

Ice cream keeps us cool.

 

Leaves fall on the ground,

Many colours are found,

Red, orange, yellow, brown,

Harvest is here,

So much to see and hear.

*

Krishika is 11 and lives in the UK.

Story 419

Raindrops

by Johnny Li

Fragile little things, beautiful blue jewels that splatter on the floor.

They break into a million beads, before losing all sense of appeal

And beauty as everything blurs into a pool of dull, boring water.

Tears, fragile little things, sorrowful, pathetic expressions

Of emotions that splatter on the floor. They break

Into a million words, before losing all sense of

Self and meaning as everything blurs into

A pool of convoluted feelings. Hiding

With an umbrella, it shields him dry

From my Raindrops, It shields

Him dry from my Heart.

The rain drops, and

We drop.

*

Johnny is 15 and lives in the UK.

Story 420

The Obsidian Omnipresence

by Alizeh Aadil Hashmi

Everywhere I turned, the trees were just blurs of vermillion, saffron and murky maroon. The sound of constant crunching and crinkling of the ancient leaves clashed with my racing breath and desperate footsteps. Echoes of his malicious laughter rang painfully in my ears. He’s... gaining... on... me. I... can... feel... him... coming...

I never thought I would be a fugitive, nor imagined the very notion of being hunted down so easily like prey. Poignant memories flashed into my mind, mixed with the consuming terror that weakened my every step. At the edge of consciousness, a weak scream escaped my mouth.

"Why?”

*

Alizeh is 13 and lives in the UK.

Story 421

A Winter Made of Wonders

by Deekshna Murkuri

The leaves on the trees disappear

All the snow gradually appears

The best time finally reaches

Many people notice the bare branches

 

Less children go outside to play

The white snow has to stay

You do indoor activities

Here comes the school nativity

 

Children get given pretty presents

All of them smile under the moon crescent

Santa in his red, white and black suit

Following his long world route

 

Just look at these snowy, wonderful days

In all its snowy ways

Under the moon and the stars

Looking over thousands of snowy-topped cars

*

Deekshna is 7 and lives in the UK.

Story 422

The Revenge

by Elizabeth Elvis

Once there was a young pharaoh, joyful and kind, who secretly loved a girl pharaoh. His friends discovered his feelings and, out of envy, encouraged her to fall for another man, Malden; handsome, charming and adored.

Heartbroken, the pharaoh’s grief twisted into rage. Betrayal hardened him, turning kindness into cruelty. At a grand feast, he saw Malden again. With trembling hands, he poured a hidden substance into Malden’s drink.

Malden collapsed, lifeless, as the hall gasped. Though revenge was his, the pharaoh’s heart remained broken, and he ruled with ruthless power, forever haunted by love lost.

*

Elizabeth is 13 and lives in the UK.

Story 423

The Little Cloud Painter

by Aviyana Bhudia

Every morning, Ella liked to watch the clouds drift past her window. One day, she noticed a tiny figure sitting on the edge of a cloud, swinging its legs like a child on a playground.

“Hello!” Ella called.

The little cloud painter waved a tiny paintbrush that shimmered in the sunlight. With a flick, he painted a rainbow across the sky, then sketched a fluffy unicorn galloping beside it. Ella gasped with delight.

As the clouds floated away, the painter smiled and brushed a message into the sky: “Thank you for watching.”

*

Aviyana is 8 and lives in the UK.

Story 424

Numbers for Hope

by Ruby Bruce

One morning, a young girl entered a math competition. Over the next few weeks, she made it all the way to the finals.

Today was the day of the finals. Everyone had gathered in the square to see who would be the winner. The girl answered all the questions correctly. The other finalist got five questions wrong and the judges announced the girl as the winner.

The girl was stoked, took the $1,000 prize, and headed to the hospital where the lady at the reception desk was waiting. The girl gave the $1,000 as payment for her mother's spinal surgery.

*

Ruby is 14 and lives in Australia.

Story 425

Leave Me Alone

by Beatrice Isaac

Under appreciated,

Under approved.

Underrated,

For all that they do.

Who needs you,

When I can have a machine?

Who needs a parent,

When all I want is to stream?

Who needs your love,

Support and care?

When all I want,

Is to be unaware.

To spend my days scrolling,

And my nights on my phone.

Who needs guidance?

Leave me alone.

*

Beatrice is 12 and lives in England.

Story 426

The Fallen Angels

by Lexie Keen

We remember,

Those who sacrificed,

Who breathed until their final breath,

Whose last gulp of air was taken in honour.

They are heroes.

 

We give thanks,

For those stained in blood,

For those who saved our country,

For those who protected the unborn.

They are heroes.

 

Let our forever-fallen soldiers rest.

Let them watch peacefully above us.

Let us honour them.

Let them feel the peace now, not later.

They are heroes.

*

Lexie is 10 and lives in England.

Story 427

Behind the Mask

by Mst Tasnia Talukder

 

I never knew I would hate myself at only twelve. At first, my pimple looked harmless. But slowly, more pimples started to appear on my face.

People started to gossip about how bad it looked. I began to avoid social gatherings and started to wear a mask to hide them.

I consulted doctors and held onto hope, but nothing worked. I cried. I tried again and again, yet everything became worse.

Now, I realise my pimples might go away one day. But will I be able to get my old days back?

"Never!" the cruel answer whispers every time.

*

Tasnia is 16 and lives in Bangladesh.

Story 428

The Little Leaf That Changed a City

by Parth Singla

In a dusty corner of my city, a single green leaf whispered, “Clean me.”

I heard it. I spoke about pollution in reels, coded games that taught recycling, and built a LEGO windmill to power hope. Slowly, kids joined. We held kindness campaigns, planted trees, and shared stories.

One leaf became a library of change. I’m ten, but my voice, powered by imagination, made ripples. Because even small leaves can start forest fires of action.

Let’s listen to nature. It’s speaking. Are we?

*

Parth is 10 and lives in India.

Story 429

A Glimpse of Her Future

by Anya L-H

She watched black-and-white films, captivated by women who moved like poetry across the screen, alive in a way she longed to be. This was not just a dream but a glimpse of her future. Though the world was unkind and tasks felt heavy, she planned each day with quiet determination, studying the great actresses she admired and learning how to carry herself.

Then, as if by magic, an audition appeared, reflecting years of effort. Hands shaking, she stepped forward and excelled, leaving with confidence, a triumphant smile, and the certainty that her journey had truly begun.

*

Anya is 15 and lives in the UK.

Story 430

Infancy

by Rosie Stevens

Silky grass wound around my bare feet as I tottered towards a corner of my garden.

As I walked I felt the sun caressing my face, it's warm glow illuminating me. Bubbles drifted over my head, glistening with multicoloured tones in the summer sky.

"Mama bubbles!"

I laughed as my mother blew bubbles with one hand and her camera recorded in the other, as if it was the funniest thing in the world. *Click* sounded the camera.

"It feels like yesterday you were that little, where did the time go?" said Mum.

She's right. When did my infancy end?

*

Rosie is 14 and lives in England.

Story 431

The Tomorrow Puddle

by Zain Ahmed

He stepped over a puddle and realised that the reflection wasn’t his. It was still him but older by one day. That version of him was smiling slightly, holding something he couldn’t see clearly.

When he crouched down, his reflection lifted a finger to his lips. The water shimmered, showing flashes of tomorrow’s sky. Tomorrow’s clothes. Tomorrow’s tiny mistakes.

He reached to the surface and the reflection leaned back, refusing the touch. Then the water shook wildly, scattering the image into ordinary water.

When he looked up, he suddenly felt late for something he hadn’t done.

*

Zain is 12 and lives in England.

Story 432

Good Grief

by Khloe Hickey

Prologue:

Good grief isn't a thing. I've been grieving all my life, whether that's what I had or what I didn't have; I've grown comfortable with the idea of grief. Living it. Feeling it. I thought eventually it would end, but the world doesn't care for my problems. Unfortunately, life doesn't stop and wait for you, you have to keep going.

Although it's been years I still look for you every chance I get, but I see you every day despite you being gone, through everything you loved, our kids, your job, your love for boats and that stupid blanket.

*

Khloe is 15 and lives in Northern Ireland.

Story 433

You’re Not Supposed To Be Here

by Maira Mufid Sahigara

The girl stood on the shed roof, surveying her land. She spotted Rouki, her tiger.

The tigress was confused. How? Why? He’d died. He still looked so… handsome. She shook her head. No, he’s not handsome.  

"YM!" Yuki-Meikage’s sister called. 

Yuki-Meikage flinched. Koharu, her older sister. YM jumped over her fence and ran to Rouki.

"Yuks!" Rouki called out to her, his arms open. Yuki burst into tears. She hugged him.  

"I love you, Rouki, I really do!" she sobbed.

"Same!" Rouki said back to her.

Then he kissed her. It felt like bliss.

*

Maira is 10 and lives in the UK.

Story 434

Tick Tock Goes the Clock

by ViMay

Smash. I look out of my room, and a vase has fallen over. Tick, tock. The quiet yet eerie sound of the clock consumes me as I creep down the hallway. Footsteps pound on the wooden floor behind me, and I whip around, heart thundering in my ears. I glimpse the door to Mother’s bedroom slamming shut, with a sort of irreversible finality. I grab a shard of shattered porcelain, and creep into the room.

I don’t remember much after that. Hands around my waist. Being shoved in the closet. The sound of heavy footsteps. Tears streaming down my face as Mother bleeds out in my arms.

And the one thing I will never forget. The sound of the clock. Tick, tock.

*

ViMay is 13 and lives in the US.

Story 435

Where the Light Falls

by Caroline

There I was… the goal I had wanted to achieve in front of me, though somehow I still felt incomplete.

As I stared, hypnotised by the elegant sheen of the fabric, my eyes darted from side to side, following the flow of light upon the strategically positioned sequins. I reached out to feel the dress. I felt so small compared to the mannequin. It was sitting elegantly and towered over me. My fingertips glided down the flowy silk, a luxurious, smooth, cool sensation.

The dress was worth millions and there I was, in awe of its presence. This was my opportunity to make my life mean something. I contemplated taking it, though it weighed on my conscience, a strong sinking feeling consuming me. Guilt welled in my throat.

That just wasn’t me. I couldn’t…

*

Caroline is 13 and lives in the UK.

Story 436

The King’s Diary

by Ryleigh Portalski

Light flared – too bright, too sharp – and the floor trembled beneath her feet. Theia's fingers tightened around her – not painfully, but with a force that felt ancient, binding, and inevitable.

Avery tried to pull back on instinct, but the goddess held fast. The air thickened, humming with a low resonant vibration that seemed to echo inside Avery's bones. The cathedral’s white pillars stretched taller, warping like heat-bent glass. The windows pulsed with golden light, each beat syncing with Avery’s heartbeat.

She hated that.

*

Ryleigh is 15 and lives in the United States of America.

Story 437

A Way Home for Isabella

by Sarah Wardiansyah

The night was silent. Isabella opened her small diary, touching the pages as if speaking softly to them. One sentence pricked her heart, and tears almost fell:

Isabella… if father is gone, you will always be the daughter he loves deeply.

Suddenly, her sister Nirbita entered without knocking.

"Clean the house. Crying isn’t your job," she snapped.

Isabella bowed her head, clutching the diary tightly to keep it safe. Though hurt, a spark of hope remained in her heart: she was still her father’s beloved daughter, and tomorrow she could be stronger.

*

Sarah is 18 and lives in Indonesia.

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